I have chosen to show my script and storyboard to my audience to get a better veiw of where my film is heading;
Jono said:
- The Best Thing Was
That the Script flowed well. I could see how the converstions would developed and the emotions behind the characters
- The Worst Thing Was
The quality of the art in the storyboard was awful. It made it difficult to visualise what the film would look like and how the scenes went together.
- Things To Improve
You could improve by making what you were going to do more obvious, maybe by writing up your ideas in word form, like a shot list.
John said:
- The Best Thing Was
The way I could really see how you had thought about how you were going to shoot it and how it would look in the end
- The worst thing Was
The storyboard. I couldn't really tell from your drawings what was going on but the words underneath made it clear
- Things To Improve
By making the storyboard more detailed it would be easier to understand what is going on.
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