The story of a man, singled out by society as the weak, meagre, underbelly, who miss-diagnosed with depression realises that there might be something slightly more sinister wrong with him. After Toms paranoia, brought upon by his condition, catches up with him he unfortunately loses control of his life, snaps and assaults two teenagers, hospitalizing one of them. Now his life has fallen into the hands of a psychiatrist who must decide whether he is telling the truth, or lying through his teeth.
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How I Edit
This is a short video clip of how I edit my movies in Final Cut Express
Sunday, 5 February 2012
Audience Feedback
For further research into what my audience wanted, I decided to ask my audience directly by screening my first rough edit and then ask them what they thought was good and what they thought I could improve on. I will probably use this to tweak my film and make improvements to the ancillaries.
Comments about the good were:
"I liked the opening shot of the slow zoom into his face and the flashbacks that run throughout"
"I liked the aesthetics of the room and how it really did look like a psychiatrists' office"
"I really liked the theme of that the film has, the message it carries and also the dialouge which is easy to understand but technical enough that it doesnt seem as if it has been dumbed down"
Some comments about the things to improve were that:
"The colours seemed to be over saturated and yellow which didnt suit the dark depreesed tone of the film"
"It needed something to signify the flash backs as they seemed to crop up randomly"
"There is are a few points that need to be tidied up as the drag on a bit"
Here is a video of 2 of the responses to my film
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